Keys to your own home


He was trying Ashima’s number, every-time he got the same message, “Number unreachable.”

Pratik wasn’t feeling well, so he took break from office & started for home.

He saw the keys dangling on the main door.

He thought that someone has barged in his house & he lost all that he had earned.

He tip-toed inside the house. The whole house was in order.

He was about to enter his bedroom, he overheard whispers of a pair.

When he peeped inside, he was aghast to find his wife in compromising position with his friend.

He was speechless n walked out without protesting.

(Word Count – 100)

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10 Comments Add yours

  1. Bhanu says:

    Mind blowing
    Now that’s quite something.

    But why walk of silently ?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Ila Varma says:

      when one is deeply hurt, he moves out without saying anything further, he had lost the game of life

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Bhanu says:

        Well certainly in one way
        But sometimes who got to face your failures, to learn out of it?


  2. Catapult of emotions…

    Liked by 1 person

  3. nomadwrites says:

    Not what you would expect but truth is better always. Keep writing.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Ila Varma says:

      Thanks for stopping by, it’s a fiction.

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Tina Basu says:

    That’s nicely put Ila. It’s unfortunate and sad but that’s the reality. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Very nice take on the prompt.

    Liked by 1 person

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